Tuesday, 29 October 2013

Full moon 2 By Zara Iko





Recuperating at the hospital, Nelly felt safe with her sister. Amy, Nelly’s older sister had not stepped an inch out of the hospital since the night Nelly was taken in. Amy barely rested her fatigued body since the incidence happened the same night her daughter’s birthday party took place and she was still knackered from the party's preparation. The strain on her face disappeared the moment Nelly opened her eyes when she regained consciousness. She squeezed Nelly’s hand and kissed Nelly's forehead. Nelly smiled and hot tears poured down her face – with a weak voice she said to Amy’ – “He tried to kill me Amy" "I know Nelly" Amy replied fighting her tears from rolling and putting her fingers on Nelly's lip to stop her from talking. 

Mummy!!! ...Hazel screamed as she jumped on her mum whilst her dad stood behind her. Nando kissed Amy and walked into the room with a basket in his hand which he handed over to his wife. She unpacked the basket. They brought fruit salad, chicken stir fry and noodles. Amy smiled at Nando “Its Nelly’s favourite”.
“I know!  Hazel told me and we cooked it together”, Nando replied.
 “You are my rock Nando”, she kissed him more deeply. Hazel spotting the duo ran in-between them and said “Mummy it was me who cooked it not Daddy”. Amy picked her daughter up ruffled her a little bit and said, “I know you did it Hazel”, putting her back down.

Nando stood over Nelly took her hands in his and spoke to his wife, “after you informed us she had gained consciousness we hurriedly prepared to come over hoping to catch her awake”. Amy replied, “The doctor put her to sleep after checking up on her because she was totally drained emotionally. She has been crying”.
“Have you been crying too?” Nando asked raising her head to look at her face. "You know you can’t do that in front of her, you should be her support system”.  
“Angrily, Amy responded raising her voice a little, “I couldn't help myself, I am a little emotional myself. Today for the first time I saw the stab wounds when the nurse attended to them, I almost lost my only sister”. Sensing her anger and trying to avoid any more exchange of words he moved closer to her “I know, I’m so sorry”. He held her in his arms and she let loose of more pain and wept helplessly. After about 20 minutes of crying she released herself from his embrace went into the bathroom, washed her face, cleaned it with a towel and came back out feeling a lot better. 
“Nando I think you should leave now, the little woman is already in Dreamland”, both looking at Hazel already snoozing  on the chair beside Nelly. Nando picked her up, kissed his wife goodbye, "I will see you tomorrow” he said and left the hospital.

 A week passed and both sisters discussed all that happened on that fatal day, trying to unravel the mystery behind Frederick’s erratic behaviour, still an explanation eluded them. Amy stayed close refusing to leave her sister for even a second. Frederick was in police custody as at the last time Nando went to the Police Station, there was enough evidence to pin him down for attempted murder.


The next morning both women sat together watching television and discussing general issues, when they heard voices behind the closed door of the private hospital room, then a knock at the door. “Hello doctor, we weren't expecting you now”. 
“Hello Amy” he smiled and handed a card over to her 
“I met a detective hanging around the corner with two other policemen, he wanted to come over to have a chat with Nelly but I told him he would have to come back  another day when Nelly is fit enough to talk”.  I think she is fit to talk, however it is totally up to her, when she is willing, we would allow them in. Our job is to protect and ensure the health and safety of our patients while they are in here”. 
“Thanks, doctor”, Amy replied.
 After the morning check up the doctor left. Amy took a peak at the corridor and spotted the two policemen standing guard a few feet from Nelly’s room.

Two days later, the detective visited at Nelly’s request. He shook hands with Amy and introduced himself as detective Cooper. Nelly sized him up in a glance. He was totally different from what she had expected; he was short, stocky and wore a tee shirt and leather jacket on jeans.  He was completely bald and only had hair on his eyebrows. He had on what was supposed to be white sneakers but had turned brown.
The detective pulled up a chair right beside her, brought out a pen and notepad from his jacket and started talking to her. “I am detective Cooper, the detective in charge of your case”. She nodded her head in response, and then Cooper proceeded. 
“Ma’am, can you please relate all that happened prior to your arrival here?” Nelly then recaptured the events of the fateful day up until she was rescued.
“Ma’am has your husband grieved you to the extent that you would want to kill him?”The detective asked.  Agitated by the question she responded hauntingly
“Is he the one lying on a hospital bed with stab wounds?  Was I the one caught driving away with a knife that had blood stains on it? - my blood stains?” Cooper continued “Ma’am do you know a guy named Deen Carter?”
“No” Nelly answered. “Why should I know him?”
 “He came up to the police station yesterday and gave himself up as the person you hired to get rid of your husband”.
“What! Are you for real? Nelly asked. The detective then reached for his wallet and brought out a picture a little bigger than a normal sized passport photograph. “This is he Ma’am”. Starring at the photo wide-eyed Nelly yelled in surprise. “This is the man Frederick hired to kill me; I didn’t, Frederick did”.
Cooper rose up from his seated position and left the hospital without saying another word leaving both women shocked.
“Is he for real Amy or am I being punked?
“He seems to be pretty serious Nelly; we will get to the bottom of this”. Later that afternoon in too much suspense Amy gave Cooper a ring but it went straight to voicemail.

Frederick paced up and down the house he had shared with Nelly; somehow he had managed to be out of the police net. The once bubbly house filled with love had turned to a big empty cold house with no life. All the fun memories were overshadowed by the memories of the night he tried to kill his Nelly. His plan had gone terribly wrong and he sensed he was in danger of going to jail if another plan wasn’t hatched as quickly as possible to send his estranged wife to the world beyond. Too restless to stay in the house he dressed up in a disguise so he wouldn’t be recognised and headed straight to the hospital where Nelly was. A few miles from the hospital he packed his car and walked around the vicinity of the hospital; it was in a high brow area and quite busy. He noted the restaurants, bars and hotels. He did a little bit of shopping while, studying the environment. One that really caught his eye was the hotel directly opposite the hospital. A few hours later he checked into the hotel as Marcus Marsden a businessman in town for a few days for a medical check-up. Later that evening Frederick, incognito passed by the hospital and finally rested in a bar not too far, in sight of the hospital studying police patrol, the traffic in and out of the hospital finally he retired to the hotel.
About 8 am the next morning Frederick was out and already on his way to the hospital when he sighted Nando just in front of the hospital entrance, he hurried to catch up with him giving him a good distance, so Nando wouldn’t sense he was following him. He trailed Nando, got into the same lift with him, all the while Nando being in a hurry not to get to the office late gave no attention to the others in the lift with him. It was too early for a visit but he had to deliver fresh clothes to his wife. He stepped out of the lift on the third floor and Frederick stepped out with him. The lady at the reception stopped Nando
“Sir it’s not visiting time yet, please come back at twelve”.
“You know what, he replied, hand this over to my wife in room 304 I would be back later to see her. It’s just fresh clothes in here”.
“Oh sorry sir you can go in then, didn’t know you were close family”. He made his way to the room. The lady turned to Frederick “Can I help you sir?”
“No thanks, I am with him, will just wait for him outside. He will be out soon we need to hurry to work” she smiled and returned to her desk while Frederick entered the lift and went back to his hotel room.
The walk back to his hotel was the best walk he had had in months. His plan seemed easier yet he had to find a way to sneak into his wife’s room without being caught out.

 With no word from detective Cooper for over two days, he returned to the hospital and headed straight to Nelly room. “Ma’am after thorough investigation you are charged for the attempted murder of Mr. Frederick in collaboration with Deen Carter, confused Nelly stammered.  Reading Nelly her rights, “Ma’am you are under arrest anything you say will be used against you in the court of law............... you will continue your treatment under security on discharge you will be escorted into police custody where you will be await further proceedings”. He then headed out of the room. Amy rushed behind him shutting the door after her. “Detective Cooper what about Frederick?” “Is he still in police custody?
“No he was released yesterday”, He turned his back and left. Fear gripped Amy at the thought of Frederick being free; surely he might make another attempt. She looked at the two police guards who had their back to her.

Throughout that day she had been nervous. The thought of Frederick free and possibly even in the hospital sent chills down her spine. Nando arrived at the hospital straight from work; his wife had called him panicking. Not wanting to let Nelly know the situation of things, Amy excused herself and Nando for 10 minutes to go to hospital’s cafĂ© for teas “If you need anything, press the panic button.”Amy said.
“Take your time guys” Nelly responded.

Peeking out from the visitor’s rest room Frederick headed straight to Nelly’s room as the couple got into the lift. Earlier, he had been waiting for someone familiar going up to see Nelly so he could tag along. He sighted Nando from the nearby bar as he drove into the parking lot; quickly he made his way to the third floor exchanged pleasantries with the receptionist and asked to use the visitors’ toilet while he waited for his friend Nando to come up. “Your friend has stepped out” the receptionist said he smiled at the receptionist “yea I saw them get into the elevator I will be in with Nelly”.
“Ok sir”, She replied.
“Hello officers”, Frederick greeted the police men. They nodded in response; their job was to stop Nelly escaping arrest, not to interrogate or stop visitors going in.



He got into the room; Nelly had dozed off watching television. She felt someone standing by her, she opened her eyes “Hello, I am Marcus Marsden” he said taking off his disguise and laughing. She fidgeted, but before she could yell, he placed one of his hands over her mouth then yanked her off the bed, then giving her a kick on the belly bursting open the stitches from the stab wounds. He was too powerful for her. “You thought you had escaped me whore. You lying, cheating bitch! Nah this time you won’t be lucky”. He slammed her back on the bed, removing a pillow from underneath her; he pressed it hard on her face. She struggled for about two minutes and went still. Frederick pressed on for another two minutes to make sure she was really dead. He took off the pillow felt the pulse on her hand and there was nothing. She was not breathing and she had no pulse. He laughed hysterically put his disguise back on and headed out of the room. He smiled at the receptionist and walked to the lift. As the lift opened he stood face to face with Amy and Nando. Amy sensing something thought “Nelly” she ran quickly to the room. Frederick got into the lift and disappeared from the hospital afterwards. Amy found her sister in the room lying lifeless. She pressed the panic button screaming and pulling Nelly frantically. Immediately the medical team arrived pushing Amy and Nando out of the room.    

Wednesday, 16 October 2013

Full moon part 1 By Zara Iko




With the whole of her might, Nelly dug her heels into the ground as she increased her pace running for her life. After a while running with no one behind her, she stopped to catch her breath. Would have been dead silence but for the cricking of crickets and the chirping of birds. The night was unusually bright being that it was a full moon. Realising her environment she felt a sharp pain on her right foot, she raise it up and blood was dripping out.  She seemed doomed, pain not only emotional but physical as well. 
Attending to her foot, she noticed a flash of light get brighter and brighter, she looked at the from her teary eyes and noticed a car approaching with speed. she pulled out the piece of glass protruding out of her skin so she could run instead before the car got close, but the pain was overbearing so she fell  groaning in pain. Lying by the side of the road crying she shut her eyes and reminisced about the event that led to her fleeing for her life and landing on the side of the highway.

The fateful day, Nelly left the house early to help her sister prepare for her niece’s 5th birthday party. The day had gone so well until she arrived home after the party. She entered the house quietly so she could surprise her husband who could not make the party because he had work to do. However what she met was a greater surprise from Frederick an older gentlemen, two decades her senior, handsome, suave and a chic magnet even at fifty-five. 
She met  him while she worked as a cashier in a bank. Frederick really had his way with the ladies; he charmed her with the experience he gathered from wooing women even before she was born, he provided for every and any of her need, showering her with gifts of the finer things plus all of his affection until he had her hooked on him then he proposed and married her.She got to the front of his home office wanting to sneak in and give him a cuddle  but what she was hearing made her freeze in front of the door. Backing the door Frederick didn't notice she was behind him,he was on the phone“Nelly should be back soon I know she would give me a ring before she gets here, so start coming here now. I will put things in place before both of you arrive. I become a widower today. Let me continue to brush up my acting skills. See you soon and remember I want it quick and painless”.
Disheveled by what she heard, she stepped back silently as he continued with his pretense mourning. She quietly went down the stairs. Getting to the front of the door, she peeked out of the window and saw a truck pull up in front of the house. Fear spiraled through her.Pulling herself back together, she decided to make a run for it without her car so she does not attract any one's attention. Nelly swung the door open, poised to take off and went for it. She didn't even get out of the house when a huge frame appeared in front of the door. She slammed right on it  and landed right back in the house. The noise attracted Fredrick's attention and he rushed down to her pretending to try to save her. Frederick in panic mode said to her “we are being robbed!” signaling the mercenary who had a machete in his hand to do the deed. Nelly shaken, got back on her feet, looked her husband in the eye and said “you don’t have to pretend Frederick, I know your plan". What have I ever done to you to make you want to kill me! I will disappear from your life you will never hear from me I promise. No one will ever hear about this I promise! Please let me go!” she said as she went on her knees grabbing Frederick's leg tightly. Fredrick reached for her neck with his right hand and held it tightly, raised her back to her feet and at arm’s length distance from him. Nelly squeaked in pain trying to wiggle her way out of his grip, but his grip got tighter, his intent in his eyes. Whatever the reason was she could not phantom. Just as Nelly slipped from consciousness, he threw her to the floor live a pack of rubbish and approached the mercenary, “now I want a quick stab to her heart but first hit me, I need to look like I struggled.” Landing a blow across Frederick’s face, he fell to the ground and was helped up immediately by the mercenary. Back on his feet he called on the mercenary to help him create a mess in the house like there had been a struggle. In the process of their creating a mess, Nelly came back to consciousness and with the speed of light made it on her feet and out of the door running for her dear life. The noise from her heels attracted their attention and they chased her frantically.

Lying by the side of the road, Nelly was brought back to reality by the sound of a car door getting shut. she opened her eyes and saw a hand reaching to grab her.He jacked  her to her feet and she recognised it was the mercenary, then she heard Frederick's voice saying, “bring her to the car! We have to take her back home, I reckon we haven’t attracted any one's attention yet”. As he pulled her to the car, she raised her head and looked up at the sky, the full moon shone brightly. As if energised by its light she freed herself from his hold, but still unable to run she fell right back to the ground. A group of drunken teenagers driving by saw Nelly sprawled on the road and the mercenary reaching to lift her up, pulled up their car demanding to know what was happening , they made a lot of drunken noises but  Fredrick flashed a gun at them and they scrambled back to the car and drove off. Pulling her back to her feet, Frederick felt he was wasting time, he rushed and grabbed her from the mercenary, holding her by the neck with his left hand, collected the knife from the mercenary with the right hand and said to her, “the only way I can be happy again is you dead. You are a burden, besides I would rather have you dead than you running off to be with another man". Using the knife, he pierced through her belly. He was watched as life eased out of her and then he Bundled her bleeding body into the back seat of the car, the mercenary sat in the front seat and they drove back to the house.

Arriving at the house he got down to drag Nelly out of the car, he met the door opened; and she was nowhere to be found."Take your car, i will go in mine.she couldn't have gotten far i will met you back here" Frederick said to the mercenary.  Frederick drove back through the path he came from. He fell upon a small gathering, packed his car and went through them. As soon as he saw Nelly he thought it was a perfect situation. He would pick her up, put her at the back of the car again and her blood would stain the car making whoever investigated her blood stains believe he got there as he tried to rescue her, hence the blood stains. With her in the car he would dash to the house and set things in order, wasting enough time so she bleed and didn't make it to the hospital alive. In the midst of the crowd he put up an act  wailing  and screaming “that’s my wife,Nelly! That’s my wife! Please help me , get her to my car!”

At the back of the car with no energy left, she opened her eyes, looked into the eyes of one of the by-standers eyes,shaking her head as if to say "no, don’t let him take me". Trying to understand, he scanned through the car. The light from the full moon shone brightly so he could see a silver object protruding slightly from the under the front seat of the car with blood stains on it. The car started moving, quickly he jumped right in the front seat screaming “call the police there is something going on here”. he pulled out the knife from underneath the seat,  pointing it at Frederick's neck, he asked him to stop the car. Men from the Fredrick's  side of the car forced the door open and pulled him out of the car before he could increase speed.escape. The police arrived quickly at the scene with an ambulance. Frederick was held down on the ground while Nelly was removed from the back of the car, strapped on the ambulance bed, about to be wheeled off. A police man walked up to her and said, “Just nod your head. Is he, pointing at Frederick still on the floor- responsible for this?” she nodded in affirmation and was wheeled away. Frederick was handcuffed and taken away.